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March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great story loved it just one small thing....in the last chapter when you wrote, "He arched a bit but remained in place. "Then keep your promise and sit still.." ...um...SIT is the command for his necklace. I know he is already on the ground, but usually when she says it repeatedly it still digs him in the ground, so it should have still work to some extent. you could change it to "hold still" or maybe state that it slammed him into the ground a bit. not bashing! i really enjoyed the store it cracked me up with all the interruptions. :)
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, you said you'll tell us about her powers, that's not fair!
but I liked the chapter so update soon
but I liked the chapter so update soon
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it ^_^ it was a good story keep writing:) email me
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh... Houjou is an idiot! That is all I have to say.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I loved it whenever IY would try and *mate* with Kagome and they'd get interupted. lolol I can't wait to read more!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is hot! Continue writing please!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet...nice...fun...mildly hot...
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story plz keep writing
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story. plz update soon. also, will there be any miroku/sango, or any other parings?
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story, I'm really enjoying it. But the big question is, is it over yet? I hope you continue on with the story cause it's just too cute. Anyway, great story.