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for Forbidden Love

by lilmab

person KuraRose
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Drool* Great work. I hope you update soon even though. Your not going to be able to. But i'll keep on waiting. Nice lemon and yea for future Kagome bashing. :3. hehe. Well i'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
person inu\'s love
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh you'r not as bad at writing lemons as you think you are. i enjoyed it.
Can't wait for updates and more stories from you.
person ????
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Inu for sure... and i am familiar with this artwork... How does someone draw like that? I like to draw but i dont because i suck at it
person jaylike
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looked at those pictures and they are cute. I love them and I hope you get to the Lemon soon.
person yami pandora
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person Satsuki
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is so cool more more more
person Shantaza
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a great start. Thanks for sharing it with all us readers. I look forward to reading how it deelopes from here. If I may make a sugesstion, the parenthetical notes seem to interupt the flow... You might want to add them as endnotes rather than putting them within the story itself.

You've done beter than me -- I still haven't posted a story yet.