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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great so far .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! but you could use a betareader to help you check spelling errors before you post. I'm not flaming you or something I'm just telling you how you can make the story better.
And yeah I hope you keep writing because it's really good.
I'm putting my e-mail here if you like to contact me
And yeah I hope you keep writing because it's really good.
I'm putting my e-mail here if you like to contact me
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have you discontinued this story? i love this story i hope you continue!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue and update often!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Hope you update soon!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_< ...so ... many ... SPELLING ERRORS... you put 'mind' instead of 'mine', you put 'warped' instead of 'wrapped', and 'shock' instead of 'shook'. O_o plus I thought Sesshoumaru had only one arm. Oh well. Other than that, great fic so far ^_^
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not as many errors this time but the lack of commas got me confused. Other than that, XD still an awsome fic!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your doing well on this!!! i cant wait too see another chapter!! i hope inuyasha's friends (except kagome) except inuyasha and sesshomaru's relashoship!!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So well Kagome ever find out about them? or win they come back as a couple well shocke eveone?...well there be Jealousy in the air?...well I hope it don't turn out that bad it a pritty good story.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really cool. ^_^ So kawaii. I look forward to your update next month.