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for Nagare

by tareacel

person rpgamer
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That... was a beautiful chapter. What else can be said about it? Beautiful chapter in a wonderful story by a gifted writer. (see, no flaming from this guy. What's to flame? It's a great story)
person tass
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better than porkchop sandwiches! *nodnod*

seriously though, this is one of those few fanfics that come along that doesn't need sex to be good. it's actually that well-written. shaddup, don't argue with me, it really is. i said don't argue! there's so much detail and you're one of the only fanfic writers out there to pull off a ja/ban with both of them in-character.
person Andrew
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tarea, you have a very nice story so far. I will continue to read any update any chance I get. Uh *doesn't know what else to say* Keep up the good work? *hugs* If these reviews feed the author... who feeds your muses?
person Heidi
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! This story's just too damn sweet! I love Jakotsu/Bankotsu, and this story makes me love them even more. Can't wait for the next update!
person IPT
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*holds out hands*

More?


*piku*

I love chapters where absoloutely nothing overly dramatic happens. o.O It makes it more down to earth.... (If you can call Inuyasha down to earth that is.)
person Lacaian
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sa-sed!! I love your attention to details. Again, I'm amazed at the hot sticky feeling I get from reading the first chapter. *blush* Nooooooo!! I'm not trying to be perverted, I swear! O.o(sweatdrop) What I mean is, this story **feels** like summer. It makes me drink lots of water. And sweat. And pant. For two reasons. One, as before mentioned, it feels like summer. Two, well... it's hot!! Ara, that's the best I can do for a review right now. Now I owe you about twenty more. heh-e-he...... ~SwaI
person Boxers
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. It. ^_^ I really love it! You are such a great writer, and I envy you for it... But you already knew that. Anywho, no doubt, this is one of your best stories yet!! Keep writing! (I know you will, but you know... Hey, might as well tell ya to anyways.)
person Raven
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, It's still pretty good.........BUT WE WANT SOME ACTION!!!!!!
person blood-red
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm still here and reading and I still encourage you to complete this story. I'm in love woth it already. So please update soon and often and you'll just make my day!! ^-^*!
person IPT
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyah. Now I'll sit here and wait impatiently for more. You've certainly gotten my attention. Plot and character development usually does that. o.O