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FUCCKK! FUCKKK! I AM SO SCREWED UP!
Yeah... Inuyasha... that is the right word!!!
I know that Haru was Inuyasha... all the little things... ne^^ He really don't thought about that he own kids have demonblood, that was... stupid. Even when he said, it's a secret between us... The little ones will tell Kagome... somehow...
And another thing... I think... Inuyasha betray himself... Because he know how to use a bathroom... Such modern Bathromms don't exist in the fedural era... and I also think... when he see Ramen... ^^ and because of the kids. It will come a situation... when he couldn't deny it anymore... and then... Kagome... WOOAAAA
So...
Like always: Please Continue
Love ya...
JunaBlossom

It´s really a good story. The way you did the plot make the characters a little OOC but the story capture my complete atention. Continue like this. I am waiting for a new chappie.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! Do you know that...This story iiiiiiiiiiiiiiis good..SOOOO KOOL! I LOVE IT.

I love this story. The only thing wrong is that it is hard to read. I understand that English isn't your first language...that's why I'm offering to Beta your story. If you don't know what a beta is, it's a person who reads over your story and fixes any mistakes you may have made. In other words: an editor lol. I would be more than happy to do this for you. If you would like me to, please email me at sassynsweet8264@hotmail.com or my AIM screen name is sassynsweet82645. Please consider my offer! It would make all the difference in your story!

Aaaw man this is exciting! You can't stop just like that :) i think he's being a jerk to her! pls update :)

Wow, great chap can't wait til next update, hurry soon ( and the plot thickens *L*)

TTTThanks so much for your correction JunaBlossom....grazy.....crazy.....lol. I think beginning grazy....no....crazy writing this fic.
Love you too...

Thanks for the appreciation from Rhiannon and the others readers. Good to know that you all like my fic. Meanwhile keep on tunning in the story.......

As always..........I love you all....Thanks for all the reviews.....

wow, another cliffy, I cannot wait til you update, it is also killing me did Kags marry Inuyasha... hmmmm

Like I said... Haru has to be Inuyasha. And more I read... more I believe it is him. There a little things like -This are Mirokus children?- He is a doctor, right... somehow^^ But he would say then -Miroku-san/sama- because he "don't know" Miroku.... And like he punch the Kitsune...
Shippou is right^^ And he could smell it, or not? He is a youkai who is able to smell the different, if Haru is Inuyasha or not.
And also... what will be Inuyashas... sorry Harus reaction when he see the little girl, from the faithful night...
So I say: Like always:
Please continue
JunaBlossom
PS: Shippou scream: HAAAA... I gonna grazy!! I think you mean -crazy- right...

OMG.....................OMG.....................I knew it HARU is INUYASHA...right???? OMG...this suspense is killing me.....Can't wait to see how Haru's going to react when he saw his children..........OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMG....I feel the tense already...PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEASE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUPDATE SOON!