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person darkjakken
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what are you doing right now................PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEAASE UUUUUUUUUUUUPDATE SSSSSSSSSOON. Don't let Kagome married Houjo.........marry her with me instead....::))))Just kidding!!! Man....! I love your story....my brother thought I am getting mad....he told me ....I like to talk by myself everytime I read your story......because I really.....pissed off with that bitch.....KIKYO!! PPPPPPPPLEASE WRITE SOME MORE.............OMG
person animegirl93
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you evil cliffy UPDATE!!!!!!! and your story had less mistakes your really improving
person Shyneamor
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you, that chapter was way to short....I need more!!! plz update...
person Shyneamor
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it is me again...I read chapter 18 before I read chap. 17....I still want more but I have to say, I like where this Kikiyo business is going. She is really being a bitch and poor InuYasha, I wonder how he will find Kagome...I hope he makes it before Kagome is marry off...maybe he will just show up just before the I Do's....plz update soon, this story is great...I really need to stop reading your story so much and finish my own before people start flaming me.
person chanda
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok Kags mom needs to go...LOL Please update soon...
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here I am again!!!
Damn.... why do you must stop here... huh? Thats soooooo unfair *cry*
I wanted to know how Inuyasha go trough the well... I mean... there is allot of cement^^ And yayyy... the baby got an japanese Name... *kissyouallover*
What else?
Please continue... I really like your FF... I said that a few times^^ its the truth...
See you next chapter
Juna
person Christine
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this. When is Inuyasha going to see kagome? Soon i hope. Oh, can you mixed this chapter by put in "" when the charators are talking. But besides that is was great.
person Shyneamor
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One, I will like to say that I love this fic and I think I've mention that before but damn it I'll say it again. Two, on your chapter 16, you might want to check back over it because you have many typos...I can tell that you must had 'cut and paste' this from an email because I get the same conclusion when Original Sinner edits my fic's....Please update soon....I'll be waiting...
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your correction Shyneamor.....I didn't realise that writing is looking weird like that after it has been uploaded. SOOOOOOOOORY for all the readers. I try to correct that. Thanks again for your interest for my story. I'LL BE BACK!!!
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool