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person chanda
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello its me again, I do not have a problem understanding this story, for someone whose secound language is English, it is very good by the way. I love this story.. I still think that Kags mom needs to go...LOL... Please do not let people discourage you.. And I look forward to the next chapter.

person putrikagome
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank....you.....Arigato for all of you who have given your reviews. To my loyal readers.... thanks for reading my story and bearing the mistake or errors in my writing...lol. Your reviews are my inspirations to keep on writing. Guess what ....I will tell you how the story will end..............is.....is....

"You'd better shut your mouth....putrikagome!!!", yelled all Inuyasha's gangs.

"Ups....sorry guys...."
person ava
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good. this story is so interesting. i can't wait to read what happens next...wil kagome find yuki....will she decided to get married to hojo.....will she stay with inuyasha and yuki...will kikyo kill them all....???? i guess i will have to wait. PLEASE update soon.
person sexykagura
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG..............OMG..........what a powerful chapter!!! I have just read the story today.......(I regret didn't find this story earlier..my gosh I must tell to my friends....)....I have been crying a lot especially for chapter 19..........DAMN YOU!! This the best ever story I read. It's so different and sweet from any other story. Please...please don't end so soon.
person Michael22
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story hass been grwat so far and the way you keep updating is fantastic because the readers don't to wait to see what will happen. The story because it's a litt;e bit different of a plot or path from other stories so keep up the good work and lets finish it up please.
person Chio
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi. This is really a good fic, please continue updating. A short final can be very rushy so I prefer a long one so many details can be added.

Thanks for sharing so excellent fic.
person Shyneamor
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooo! You are so evil....I love fic....damn you, I love this fic. Update soon
person animegirl93
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW O.O this is a sad fic BUT I LOVE IT!!!(its spelled crazy not grazy) UPDATE!!!
person alix
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story but why is Kagome so stupid? She had the prefect chance to tell Inuyasha and leae with him. He left Kikyoy for her and confessed everything what does Kagome want? Sometimes she is so selfish and stupid. I know she doesn't want to hurt her family but they knew Inuyasha was looking for her or at least came back and they still decided she would marry someone else. they are hurting her and her baby. Kagome is hurting her baby too and doesn't she know how she is hurting Inyasha by not letting him see his child. Inuyasha has been alone so long and then when he finally takes a chance again she hurts him.... she is no better then Kikyou in my books right now. Update soon and I hope Kagome gets her head out of her butt.
person bettychan
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry. I just can't hardly read this story. Please tell me that English is your second language. You really need a beta reader to correct the grammer. The plot is interesting. If only it was easier to read.