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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story! I'll be keeping an eye on it, you've got a wonderful idea. You're grammer is good, you write with intelligence, you use paragraphs, and this story is only a small stretch of imagination from the original. Great job.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've taken a LOT of Terri Botta's "The Lucky Ones" plot elements haven't you? You even gave the exact same explanation for Inuyasha being sterile. You even have a little hanyou boy that needs to be adopted. I don't like copycats....
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A STORY, REALLY INTERESTING ACTUALLY....I TOTALY HOPE THAT YOU'LL BE ADDING MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY SOON, CAUSE I REALLY WANNA TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.....OOH!! GRATE WORK BY THE WAY, KEEP IT UP O.K.