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December 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story, I couldn't stop reading it.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I loved your story. I thought it was a very believable direction for the characters and a likely problem
to come up. You wrote the characters very well, but you always do.
Bye now!
to come up. You wrote the characters very well, but you always do.
Bye now!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit sad this is over...I've grown fond of Takara, though I'm glad he's found a mate. I was pleasantly surprised to see Shiori make an appearance. Inuyasha and Kagome are so perfect for each other, and this is an interesting extrapolation of how their relationship could develop, while keeping them in character (and having them save the world yet again!). A well written story, unlike anything I have come across in Inuyasha fanfic. Brava.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the story's great. Is it done?
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just found your story, you did a very good job on it. it was very original, while it did have some aspects i've seen in other stories, it is very apparent that this story is all yours. hope to see more from you, keep up the good work.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Hanyous.. a lil neko youkia in like toddler age? HOW CUTEEEE! and a wolf hanyou would be adorable too! keep up the gr8 work.. im soo glad the claypot is dead now hehe .. now Kagome also have a lot of lil hanyous to raise with Inuyasha .! keep up the gr8 work!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good...disturbing & tense...but that too is a good thing. Great job!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOMEEEE.. OMG ITS SOOOOO GOOD! I love this story! hahah die kikyo! ..(i hate her sooooooooooo much) Now Kagome can take her soul back and free herself and Inuyasha since she is an unbelievable strong Miko.. I like Takara hes cutee.. and he will make another perfect son for Kagome.. u should have her save him sumtime in this story and him call her okaasan that would be adorable.. anyways keep up the excellent work! and plzzzzzzzzz update soon~
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH, THAT WAS A GRATE CHAPTER 5....PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY SOON PLEEEEEASE, CAUSE I FOR ONE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a surprise - a well-written, well thought out and interesting story... I can see similarities to The Lucky Ones, but I can also see that you are taking this on a very different path than Terri Botta. I have to say though - you might think about changing the title - I almost didn't read the story becuase it sounded like something in the Star Wars genre... I look forward to the next chapter!