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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story seems to be going good so far.... but your german language-skills suck (if you need help then ask...)
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ONCE AGAIN, I HAVE FAILED TO BE YOUR FIRST REVIEWER FOR A DARN CHAPTER! Yeesh, I live with you, can't you tell me when you are going to update! Anyway, once again this chapter was amazing. Inuyasha and Miroku...hilarious characters. I absolutely love Hiro Higurashi and I liked how you portrayed his character. I especially enjoyed his experiance as a steerage passanger and his experiance on Ellis Island. All that was definately believable and accurately correct. I am also awaiting the chapter in which Higurashi-san will ask Inuyasha to take Kagome as his wife. AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGG! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! You have to update sooner than September 25. Please?! Pretty please.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! very good! i really enjoyed it! i'll try to find this again in a month! great chapter!! i'm interested to see what kagome's gonna be like! ;)
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! And ready continue readin' this fic! Hmm...I have to say, I really liked this chapter. I admired how you took the time to portray Kagome's dad.
I wonder what Inuyasha will say when he finds out he has to marry Kagome? I can't wait for that part! *sighs*
I wonder what Inuyasha will say when he finds out he has to marry Kagome? I can't wait for that part! *sighs*
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillant.
Siimply brillant. I like it.
A lot.
Siimply brillant. I like it.
A lot.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update...yep that says alot, and hopefully encourage you to update. No pressure.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the love of Kami....that was the saddest thing I ever read. I cried so much. It was just so sad but I really really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you update soon cuz I know this story has a future. I can tell.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you have a great story going here. I will be looking forward to more in a couple of weeks but if you don't make your self appointed dead line then don't sweat it, I'm sure those of us who like this will be watching with heated aticipation. I love stories like this and will usually read them first. I'm not a Kikyo hater or anything but I like the fact you got her out of the way quickly so only deep rooted memories are left. I have often found that memories are harder to break through when someone is depressed than if the person they are fawning over is still alive. When they are alive then there is the possibility that they will screw up but when they are dead the one who loved them only has the memories so they tend to compare every new attraction to the original love. I know I didn't describe this too well but I hope you get what I mean. I have read quite a lot of romance (actually I don't care for romances that much but they seem to suck me in once in a while when the description catches my interest) and I think you have a great idea here. Keep it up! It might even turn into something you would want to publish sometime. Or maybe not. =)
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far and I hope you update soon. By the way, the correct spelling is "bouzu" not 'bozou'. Check it out here: http://www.csse.monash.edu.au/~jwb/cgi-bin/wwwjdic.cgi?1KJ if you want. Otherwise you have very good grammar and spelling skills and I appreciate it.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Very good indeed. Length was perfect. I can't gush enough praise.