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for Dream of Acceptance

by kimisan

person i wish upon my computer
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wish rin would like naoko it would make for an interesting change even if it is just to make hiei jeolous
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mwahaha Shizuru kicked her ass. That'll teach the bitch... Poor Rin, this entire thing is tearing her up, Hiei needs to do something and soon. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol hiei has compitition i love that please update soon^^
person wow
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is wonderful bring on the sexual tension
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that bitch is dead, she deserved it for everything she has done. Good chapter, update soon please.
person MHALL
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiei need to run after rin make her is mate
upate soon
person human
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
we need an description of rin what the hell does she look like when shes 16
person cloud
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naoko and rin please pretty please
the story is great keep going love your work hope there are going to be several sequals

im sorry if im asking too much

begins to cry

i just love your work so much

sniffles
person coco
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naoko and rin please not to comfortable with hiei though it is kinda fun
your doing great keep writing hope for ten more chapters
person ness
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters... I know im very late in typing this but, im glad you were so quick with the sequal... cant wait for the update...later