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for Dream of Acceptance

by kimisan

person crossover
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah this is great though im not to comfortable with the rin hiei pairing please change :P
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that he finally came around and admitted to himself that he loved her. And I stand behind you 100% on the pairing. It is after all your story, you should pair up who you want to. I'm glad you decided to do this one, I haven't seen it before. Good chapter update soon please.
person jay
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
maybe a kouga rin pairing
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor rin i want her n hiei to bcome mates already !!!! did hiei tell yukina that hes her bro yet will he ever omg pleae updates soon im going crazy here!!!
person yuske1fan
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naoko and rin please
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO somehow I believe that Hiei is in for it. Though I'm sure he's more than capable of standing up to them. Mostly anyway lol Can't wait to see what happens between Shizuru and Akita. It should be quite interesting. Update soon please.
person MHALL
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiei/rin all the way
upate soon
person sel
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story, I hope rin finds out the truth about things....

Sel ps. I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin, someone needs to kick Hiei's ass for hurting her like that. *sighs* men.. I must admit, I love this chapter, I couldn't stop laughing right up to the point the competition for Rins affection came out. Keep up the good work, update soon please.
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm wonder why Hiei bolted like that. He cares for her, so where's the problem? Unless he's going off on the "no one should love me" kik. In that case I have a feeling there will be several people out for his head. Perhaps a little competition is just what he needs to move his ass. Good chapter, please update soon.