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for Dream of Acceptance

by kimisan

person sadsoul
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You didn't... how could you do that to Rin just when she was somewhat happy with Hiei. *Whacks author on the hand* Bad Author!

Now I hope this opens up alot of angst, with Rin thinking she might be unworthy of Hiei or even better maybe this episode will force Hiei to tell her how he feels. Hmmm I'm also wondering if Hiei knew she was being raped, because of his mark. Oh I cant wait for the next chapter. You better be typing right now. Damn you for making em fall in love with your story, you've spoiled me by having 22 chapters in just a few days, so keep em coming.

Ok I think I have done enough... I've praised you, threaten you, hit you, and questioned you.

Here's some pocky and have a nice day :)
person Alice M.
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad for a moment, then it was happy again. Up-date more, more, more!
person Alice M.
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Up-date! Really love this stroy. I think its because its something new.
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please oh please do a Hiei/Kag next. I will love you forever! lol

This was a very good chapter, I like how Hiei was more than willing to give Rin the space she needed even though he had his own needs. I also like how Shizuru was keeping Kouga in his place lol Good job, I look forward to your next story.
person Anime sweetie
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh its the end already. Such a great story. But can you tell us if Kagome's going to have kids. Come on Kurama and Kuronue are have to wanted kids with Kagome after waiting 500 years. Can't atlest put that in please!! Oh well if not its ok. Hope you keep writing I can't wait to read you next story.
person MHALL
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it Hiei get the girl will he tell her about his sister
upate soon
person MHALL
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it Hiei get the girl will he tell her about his sister
upate soon
person pa
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why not ad a little rape
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Fuck this isn't good. Well, atleast Hiei marked her before she was taken though I'm not sure how much of a help that's going to be at the moment. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol Looks like almost everyone is getting some there tonight. Lucky girls lol good chapter update soon please.