schedule
August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that. InuYasha's comment at the end was great. ^_^ I kinda wish you'd write more to this story, but its good as a one shot as well ^.^
schedule
August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*evil grin* remember to brush daily I love it!!!! ;) Plz keep writing.
schedule
August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz keep writing
schedule
August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL, EVIL, EVIL, WAY DID YA HAVE TO END IT ON A CLIFHAGER....DAM, DAM, DAM....I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT, OOH,LIKE YOUR STYLE BY THE WAY....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, AND PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEASE!!!! UPDATE THIS STORY SOOOOOON!!!! O.K.
schedule
August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of Course we want you to add more! It's a cliffie! So please add a second chapter, and no, this does not suck, infact it is better than the vast magority of the fics posted recently, so I'll keep you bookmarked. Update soon!
schedule
August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope u make a next chapter!!!!!!!!
schedule
August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope u make a next chapter!!!!!!!!
schedule
August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for including me in ur AN i don't like to give flames because i rather like to give advice or constructive critisim. Let me know when the next update is.
^_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________^
^_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________^
schedule
August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Sakura and Angel2005399 for your kind reviews! When I had first posted this fic, I was scared to death that someone was just going to say 'this sucks' or 'you have no right to post that here' (or something like that), but it didn't happen (at least not yet, knock on wood) and I'm just so happy that there are people out there that like my work! I tried to leave the end of the fic open so that I could add another chapter (if people wanted me to add to the story) so I'll try to go ahead and get to writing a second chapter since there's been a request for it (and this time with a full-out, balls to the wall, making-so-much-noise-your-scare-the-neighbors-and-the-cops-are-called lemon ;) Well, that is if I don't experience any writer's block, but I'll try my best not to disappoint my wonderful readers.) Again, thank you so much! *runs off to go write lemon*
schedule
August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha, that was really well done with a nice twist in the end. Very original. Great grammar and descriptions!