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for Remember to Brush Daily

by Ninquesse

person Rawben
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol!!!!!!!!!!!! you're damn right! you'd better go runnin off to write the next chapter!! i'm so excited!! that was hilarious!!
person pat
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank u i have been waiting so long to hear the update 4 this so plz hurry on it
person lemon_ice
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw shit! i thought it was a one shot, and wa just about to review saying you should write more, i mean hat was hot, but inuyasha saw her! *gasps* that has definite potential *eyes glaze over at the thought* and then i sw that lovely button that ssaid next chapter, and i was thrilled....and then it was just you thanking someone for there review or whatever!! i was sooooo dissapointed! you should definitley write more!!!!!!!

yours sincerley:
lemon_ice
person flicker and blaze
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, hope you write more to this soon. . That is indeed an interesting use for a toothbrush. I've never heard of it. . Vegetables and fruits yes. But tooth brushes. . no.
Hope to see another post soon,
Flicker
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! and humourous although it felt more like a cliff hanger and so you must continue!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway keep up the great work and i hope to read mor of your fics in the future!

kitty
person rei
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! YOUR GOING TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER IM SO HAPPY I THOUGHT YOU WOULDNT!!
person chubbers
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the story! i had a friend that had a vibrating hairbrush.....nedless to say i never asked to borrow it.........
person fallenangel7583~NSI
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting. well done. didn't think of that one. lol. a little choppy around the distinction of inu and 'inu' but still very well done. i'm interested to see is reaction. lol. great ending.
person Mimori
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! nother chappi! please!!!!
person josh
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAH, THAT WAS GREAT! AND, GOOD IDEA ABOUT USING LINKIN PARK AS THE LYRICS. CAUSE LINKIN PARK KICKS ASS JUST LIKE THIS THIS DID! GOOD LUCK WITH THAT NEXT BALLS TO THE WALL CHAPTER. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!