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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!!! please update soon or im going to go crazy.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL i like the chapter it was kinda weird since shes pleasuring her self with a toothbrush But anywyas it was still good and what made me laugh the most was that it seemed that the masturbating see was about maybe 5 to 10 mins ( maybe im a slow reader) but it the ending you said how the music ended and it was repeting itself well that means that she was only maturbating for umm 2 to 3 mins. Well, anywyas great job.
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was a good storie so far i wish for you to continue.. lol... and at the end ... major laugh... i laughed so hard that i fel backwards in my chair.... that was great. dont stop
love Star
p.s good job
love Star
p.s good job
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg haha i loved the ending to chapter one!
it made ME hold my breath in painful mortification for kagome
oh wow....
inuyasha.. why do you have to show up at the most inconvenient times
hahaha! i love this!
cant wait for your next update!
^_^
it made ME hold my breath in painful mortification for kagome
oh wow....
inuyasha.. why do you have to show up at the most inconvenient times
hahaha! i love this!
cant wait for your next update!
^_^
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good stuff. I like the open endedness of the first chapter, it leaves many a possiblity for what comes next. don't rush yourself in writing the next chapter though, and I'm sure you will be able to produce the 'lemon' that you intend.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how embarassing so if thats brushing whats flossing
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! O_O INU YASHAA!!!! xDDD I KNEW THAT HE WAS COMING IN, I JUST KNEW IT!!! xD don't stop updaiting WHY DIDN'T U PUT A NEW CHAP!?! ONLY ONE CHAP IT'S NOT WHAT I WANT U KNOW?!?!?!?!
Hope u keep writing this is SO GREAT!
And sorry for my bad english, i'm latina *O*Uu soooo u knowwwww xDDD lol we are not that good with english! XDDD KEEP UPDAITING PLEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope u keep writing this is SO GREAT!
And sorry for my bad english, i'm latina *O*Uu soooo u knowwwww xDDD lol we are not that good with english! XDDD KEEP UPDAITING PLEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good and very funny at the end. I liked it a lot. Your writing is very good, unlike most others. It would be cool for Inu to continue the "Brush Daily" thing :p.
Dark
Dark
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was really good i was shocked that inuyasha was there...so funny. you should keep going it is really good. i'll keep my eyes open for an update.
jaime
jaime
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that seriousley was hot! the ending htere was the best! though i think that is chouldnt be an ending, but a continuing-to-the-next-chapter-thing instead. and yes, arent those electric toothbrushes just wonderful???? ;) your lemon coming up should be HOT!!! cant wait!!!