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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is hilarious! you said that theres more to come so please update.
schedule
September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahahaha!! I nearly laughed my head off - this is so good! I am still wiping tears of laughter away ;))
You did not plan to give this more chapters? It is a wonderful one-shot, but I really would not mind reading some more chapters of this...
Oh my, I am still laughing ... thanks for posting this story!!
You did not plan to give this more chapters? It is a wonderful one-shot, but I really would not mind reading some more chapters of this...
Oh my, I am still laughing ... thanks for posting this story!!
schedule
August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS is GREAT. I had the best clear-as-crystal visual of this... and I'm still grinning. Great bit - and I'd love to see more like this!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was hilarious. Loved it. Post more stuff, because you're actually a pretty good writer, ok?
Though....it would've been funny to see a chapter on what exactly did happen that night...
You should do a second chapter.. Please?
Though....it would've been funny to see a chapter on what exactly did happen that night...
You should do a second chapter.. Please?
schedule
July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS TOO FUNNY.....I really like that chapter, I hope that you are going to write some more.....please do.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, one more thing.....I think you should have the guys pay the girls back....plz update!!!!!!!!!
schedule
July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! That was great. I laughed straight through the entire thing! Now if only there was a sequel.... ;)