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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This really isn't as great as many had said it would be. You have too much dialogue in it and not enough detail. Try adding detail to the story. Use your five senses. How did Kouga feel, taste, touch, see, and hear. Stuff like that.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....That was so cute!
I liket it!
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
I liket it!
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it.Give us some background on how all of this love and happiness came about,but otherwise great story.Write some more please!!!!!!!!!!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reread it. I was mistaken. I am sorry, this is a good story. Thank you.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was okay, nothing special.
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