rate_review Reviews

I've enjoyed reading what you have been writing and thought it's about time I told you that. Very refreshing point of view that this is written in. You do start to see through Sango's eyes. The action is used well as a backdrop to her emotions as well as being interesting on its own. The story is her story though. The over all effect is very good. All in all it stands out as being something different in a very good way. Now you asked about a beta - have you asked on the AFF beta site yet? If not here is the addy http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders/ Please keep up the great work.

omg that was soo sad.
This sotry is really getting to me and I'm so emotional.
I cant wait for the next update

Please, update soon and no more cliffys, Kouga can't be dead!!! I won't allow it!!!

Chigirl

wow.. so sango is finaly realizing what we all knew??!!! that's so cool!!! great chapter .. can't wait for more!!!

Brilliant. Excellent story. I like the way the relationship between Kouga and Sango is progressing, but it seems to be moving a bit slowly. But that could just be me and my damn impatience. There is plenty of description, in fact, a little more wouldn't hurt. Also, I don't know about your writing system, but most authors of fanfiction submit their works to a beta or two before submitting it, so be sure to find one if you don't have one already. But I greatly enjoy the story, please don't stop prematurely.

I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SANGO AND KOGUA ARE GREAT TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK AS A WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP THE GREAT WORK COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wish to congradulate you once again on a wonderful chapter! Once I figure out how to use recomended reading, you are going to be the first on my list! I loved the description! Seriously...amazing!
well...not much else to say but...ROCK ON!

i am voting for A) sweet but disturbing like the fic soo so much more of who sango is than ne other fic ive come across so far keep up the great story!!

yea it wouldnt be very sango-like if she just immediatly had sex with kouga

io totally admire kouga for having the discipline to willingly wait AWWWWW it makes him more endearing!

although....any other woman in sango's position would've already jumped kouga LOL

I love this story.
Its not too rushed you know.
I like how you made Sango slow things down with Kouga.
Wonderful so far