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May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love love this story please continue it!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really cool
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dsfgs
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! Sesshomaru and Rin is my favorite characters. I like this fic. more please!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was short, yet so good. Update ASAp!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good, please finish soon!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't give bad reviews but you didn't do a very good job. I think that your story had the right ideas but your characters were all wrong. The things that Rin said she would never say to Sesshoumaru. And even if she did, he wouldn't allow her to disrespect him like that. In no way would Rin be a modern teenage, which is the attitude you see to give her. But if you work on your writing I'm sure that you will do better. You may want to reconsider rewriting your story. I couldn't even get past the first chapter because I was so upset with the way you represented the characters. Please don't take this review to hard to the heart, I just wanted to give you a useful critique.