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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad. interesting to see what inu is going to do next. i would suggest though to use qoutations. without them, it can get a little hard to read.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hopelessly hentai....gotta love it. Hope you continue!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very kinky and sexy please continue i really want to see where this goes...as if i already didn't know
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh thats good when will u be updating?
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooowww, can't wait to see what happens next, I'm on the edge of my seat :)
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
youch! ooooo i can see IY getting revenge for that one lol damn i've seen some bad PMS but those two are deadly when it happens! ^^;;;;;;
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha more please? and can you email me when you update this story? well see ya hehehe
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's got potential, but there ARE some grammatical problems to deal with. Stick with it!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!