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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story keep on writin
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmmr uonna update?
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaz update soon i chech it all the time and it makes me sad that u dont have it or could u make it a sooooooper long chappie?
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It's very exciting and entertaining. Your grammar and spelling are pretty good too.
Will you continue this? Or is that the end? I hope there's more, it's turning out really great!
Will you continue this? Or is that the end? I hope there's more, it's turning out really great!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. great idea. if ur goin to continue, i would like there to be a bigger fight. more of kagome bein taught a lesson. it would give mor truth to da title. but anyways taht is also a good ending. 4 STARS!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um, i'm confused....this story is well written, but I just have one question. Has Kagome already started her period or is she about to? Cuz if she has already started, don't you think it's a little gross to have Inuyasha go down on her? I'm just confused on that topic.....
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job. I love this story. keep up the great work
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT. MORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh... Okay im sorry about the chapter thing i dont know why it didnt work out. But i fixed it .. i think:S Anyway Thanks for your reveiws everyone.. and Anon a Special thanks to you.
Im still kinda nervous putting these up so dont be to harsh. please.
Later xo <3
Im still kinda nervous putting these up so dont be to harsh. please.
Later xo <3
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok for one kagome dosent cuse it just dosen't seem right and how does inuyasha know how to have oral sex???