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Ah UPDATE PLEASE!????

Ah UPDATE PLEASE!????

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

your plot introduction is well planned;characters so far seem realistic with their reactions well in tone and balanced with their emotions; no loose end so far,everything seems to add up.
i really hope you continue in the same pattern of action and reaction. the lack of phisical action from the first chapters in character building, also it makes me happy 2 know ther is going to be a real plot,not just some relationship pretending to lead to nothing( there is a lot of very poorly writen fanfiction out ther and i'm glad your story can't be included or considered poorly writen,you know your stuff).
congrats and hope to see some new chapters soon

Hey,me again,except I'm logged un buuuuuuuuuuuut . . . who gives a flying rat's ass? lol srry for the randomness. Anyway, all i can say is that i love it so far and PLEASE update soon! JA NE!

Yusuke is having some serious issues and needs his ass kicked.

I do wish that Kuwabara is in this. Is he and Yukina together?
Yukina was raised as a Koorime, whose culture does not accept males. While Yukina does befriend males, it could be a different question if she's sexually actracted to a male. It's quite believible for Yukina to prefer females in that way. How does Yukina swing in this story?
I have to say that there are plenty of stories where Youko or Kurama get together with Kagoem but I've never seen a female/female pairing for YYH/IY x-overs.

It could be that Yukina was nearly envious becaus she thought Kagome was so pretty or could it be that she found Kagome acctractive? Please tell


Oh there was one amall mistake at the end of ch 2. You have Kagome listed instead of Yukina =
Kuronue chuckled and looked at his partner. “No we’re not Yoko...we’re just not with you.” Kurama, Kuronue, and Kagome laughed harder at the deadly glare Yoko sent his partner, though they could tell that Yoko wasn’t angry as his lips kept twitching at the corners.

another wonderful chapter, I wonder what reason Kagome has for being so careful. Something sounds like it has happened in the past between her and Enma or one of the more powerful gods of the spirit world and Koenma has no idea about it. Hopefully none of the guys do anything stupid to make her doubt them. Can't wait to read the next chapter, update soon please.

Just wanted you to know how much I'm enjoying your story and look forward to your next update.

Please update soon i hope that kagome kicks yusuke's ass...that way he could stop acting like a sexist bastard. That would be a sight to see....i also want to know what happened to make her change...and who are the demons that are near the shrine.....and what youko, kurama, and kuronue think about the new kagome....UPDATE SOON!!!!

very good begining makes the fic sound sooooo good i cant wait till the second chap and i really wann see how yoko and kurama interact now that they r not one please update as soon as u can