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for Bonds of Betrayal

by michelle5137

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schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, while I am an Inuyasha/Kagome shipper I'm willing to stray off the beaten path for this one. I enjoyed the begining however I am going to leave one comment but please don't take it as a flame. You're writing style within this first chapter hits me as 'impersonal' with the character emotions and interactions. If it's just because this is a summary of sorts, ignore me I love it anyway! :)