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for Bonds of Betrayal

by michelle5137

person Leslie
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found your stories and I am enjoying them very much. I don't think that I have read a fanfic like this one. Very original. Thank You. My only question other than when will you update is why is Kag acting as if she is scared? I get that she was betrayed and that she lost her first love and best friend, but wouldn't she get angry and have trusting issues, not scared when someone raises thier voice or looks like they are in a bad mood. I don't mean anything bad by my concern I was just wondering. I hope you update soon. Leslie
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, I wonder which of the team will choose to go with them back into the past. Can't wait to find out, update soon please.
person koimiko
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am strating to love your story more tham my own..it's great i think i cried while reading it. than cheer when i found out they didn't die. keep up the good work and please update soon.
person Dark_Lightning_Harowen
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My.God. I love it you did a great job you are now one of my close friends kay? Talk to me some time. I really love your story.
Ja ne
person Dark_Lightning_Harowen
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah.I LOVE KURONUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE BAT AND WOLF DEMONS. I LOVE THIS STORY CUZ ITS PLOT PAIRINGS AND BECUZ YOU PUT KURONUE IN IT. UPDATE SOON PLEAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i do like this story even if sango an iny betrayed kags an the others put i love kag/yoko/the bats(i dont really know how to spell his name) pairings i cant wait till chapter 2
person KitKat
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooooo good plz plz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV your writing ^_^ although i never pictured Sango to do something like that. I like that you thinking outside the box. :P



~KitKat (or clouded angel)
person Artemis
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is so happy someone else agrees with her that Inuyasha is useless* I never liked Inuyasha with Kagome he doesn't deserve her....*but is still very happy* At least one else knows how I feel...I thougth I was the only one
person Kage Otome
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could they, those fools! Hmph. I'm sure they'll get whats coming to them, baka's. Keep up the good work.
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're not going to get any complaints from me with what you choose to do with the characters. Personally I like to see things that haven't been done before and I believe you are right. Sango is an easy character to manipulate from as to what I could tell by watching the series. If that turns people off then so be it. It's your story. I look forward to seeing what your plans are for this fic. Update soon please.