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for Bonds of Betrayal

by michelle5137

schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i love this story
person Sei
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful job, this is an extremely original story. i've definitely never run across anything like this before. update soon!
-Sei
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon I want to know what happened love your story

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Ja Ne
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Dark_Lightning_Harowen
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i want to find out what happens to Kagome and her pack and the YuYu gang please what will happen when kagome speacks? Will her voice send even the deaf into tears,or will her voice sound so heart brocken that even the kindest of hearts want to take revenge for her,or will her voice melt the coldest heart to were it feels like its going to break even though it has no reason too. If you like my ideas for her voice use it or mabe you can come up with something else from my examples. I will review again


Ja Ne
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person Dark_Lightning_Harowen
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon pleaz update very soon
person Marina
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far, you've done a good job from what i've seen so far. whose kagome gunna end up with?? anyway, update soon.
JA NE
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
r there going to be charactor deaths in this fic omg ur story is good please update soon
person Olivia
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the heck are the characters of "Yu Yu Hakusho" doing being mixed in with the characters of "InuYasha"? Not bad though!
person Tris
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good i love it, you have to up-date very very very very very very very very very very very very very soon.
Tris