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for Raiju no Ai

by Kokai

person fwoosh
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::reads authoress note about siggestions:: How about all three, dearie? XD <3

Love it~
person nekoyasha213
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another pleasing chapter, a job well done. if you are running out of ideas try work with the mpreg stuff, WAFF seems good with this story =]
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm gonna be out tomorrow, well most of tomorrow, but when i get back i'll read what you have start to finish and cough up some ideas. off the bat, though, the most logical conflict would be with koga, since he has jewel shards and sesshy doesn't. sesshy could come into play later if they decide to go after naraku & naraku tries to pit sessh against them. well that's just off the top of my head. until next time!
person nekoyasha213
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weeee it rocke please write more soon
person Weaver
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinku* M-preg?

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Yay! I was starting to wonder why Manten was throwing up and having those mood swings. It confirms my yummy theory afterall. -lurve- Hope you continue soon. =3
person fwoosh
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::has just finished chapter three::

I love you, have my children, make me dinner, get me beer. D> ::clings to Shatter:: You're my new favourite author.
person Weaver
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have me totally hooked. O.O; Never even though of a pairing like this, but with the way you wrote it, it's nearly impossible not to be hooked to this type of pairing! XD Awesome story! X3
person -erotic poptarts-
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::snugs Kori:: I love it, I love it, I love it.

This gets better each time I read it.

I demand more. :3
person fwoosh
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::coughs:: That was me. Forgot to log in. < >;
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was drawn to this as soon as I saw Hiten's name. I admit I was a little wary about him being paired with Manten. You really did a wonderful job with this pairing. The imagery you created was wonderful. I could picture all of this in my hentaified mind. I loved how you used Raiden youkai also. That was different and unique. At first made me think of Raiden from Mortal Kombat *that's a good thing* Anyways wonderful job on this,. Great writing!!!