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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
violent and unhappy.... i liked it. XD i still dont think Naraku will ever REALLY win, but this is definatley what it would be like if he did.
a little too short for my liking but if you really wanted to you could make it longer and all that but it does work well as a lil short thing :D
a little too short for my liking but if you really wanted to you could make it longer and all that but it does work well as a lil short thing :D
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a gift for realistic descriptions. I think that the perspective of Sesshomaru is very well written, and extremely in character. Thank you for sharing another of your stories.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this *pant* is so *pant* cold. i held my breath the whole time i read it. its so sad. i cant belive... this is so heartbreaking. im going to have serioud nightmares. i almost cried. but writting it like sesshormaru would was brilliant! u really caught and retained his character. this was an intelligent though sad piece of writting. i could picture everything- though i would rather not- thats what made it so heart breaking, so terrifying. so cold.
good job. 5 STARS for realistic intensity (like this could really happen).
good job. 5 STARS for realistic intensity (like this could really happen).