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You can't just leave off there! Please update!

this is a good story so far, please update it soon i cant wait to find out what happens next

Just read this one again. It's still a really terrific plot, and I hope that someday you will find the inspiration and spark to come back to this story and add to it. ^_^ Fabulous writing, hot lemons, great tension, lots of good stuff to come! As much as I am now a total Hiei/Kag shipper, I am just so intrigued by your pairing of Sango and Kouga. And I love the potential for the girls to bond and commiserate over the way Naraku used them and messed with their lives, and the potential for Inu and Miroku to have to commiserate over losing the girls. And Inu needs to be slapped. LOL!! So does Hiei for running out on her, -- but that was to be expected. I'd love to know what you have planned for his future meeting with her! They don't even know each other's names. And I wonder if his "instincts" will cry out for his MATE the next time he goes into heat? He may be one very sorry fire youkai if he can't sate himself with anyone for the next 500 years. LOL!!! Maybe that's why he's so irritable and snarky as a Spirit Detective. HA!!

Come on! Update! I want to know what happens next!

great story so far. i cant wait to find out what will happen next. please update this again soon

Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read if Kouga admits to wanting Sango and Hiei/Kagome get together. Inuyasha and Mirkou needs some one. May be in the future.

That was wonderful...i hope to see more!

Oh no! It's been SO LONG since you've updated! Are you still writing? Are you posting on another site? Please let me know!! This story (and all of your others!) has completely got me hooked. I love the whole idea -- I think Naraku WOULD do such a thing to mess with their minds. Love the way Sango and Kouga got thrown in the mix, too -- never read that pairing before. And you just can't beat a good Hiei/Kagome pairing! But what? He didn't grab his mate and take her with him? (Even if he didn't really want one, thought his "inner demon" would demand it. Ha!) In this story, the question is: do they meet up again in the past or not until she goes back to the present? And, of course, could either Sango or Kagome (or both) be pregnant? I guess Sango can feel free to tell her now, and they can commiserate on male stupidity and insensitivity. Lots of potential for great Inu/Miroku talks as they've both let themselves get rooked out of the goods. PLEASE write more!!! SOON!!

Okay so here goes... I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE NOW! IT IS CRUTAL THAT YOU DO SO. ONLY BECAUSE I WILL DIE IF YOU DO NOT. YOU DON'T WANT THAT ON YOUR CONCENCE.

Your new fan, Lilly

woah!!write more!!its getting very interesting!!!!