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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY. UPDATE PLEASE.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome fic! Everything flowed together beautifully and I can't think of anything I'd change. Oh, and don't you dare stop writing! I want to see more work from you in the future =)
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, your writing style is very well written and no tis not a lost cause!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i swear this actually happened. the way u discribed it made it easier for me 2 picture (not to sound perverted or anythin its jus dat in order 4 me to understand stories i hav to b able 2 picture da scenes). i give this 100 thimbs up for da intensity n being able to make everything sound realistic. Also for keeping the characters in charater. 100 thumbs up!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing! Are you sure that's your first fic? ^_^
Seriously, with talent like that, you should definitely keep writing. I hope that whenever I finish writing my first story, it turns out even close to as good as yours!
Seriously, with talent like that, you should definitely keep writing. I hope that whenever I finish writing my first story, it turns out even close to as good as yours!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep on writing don't stop this is getting intresting.5 star story.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was excellent! I wish I could say more but it's 5:52 Am.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
I love this story it is so romantic.I wish a guy would do that for me and everything.You should definatley continue.I think the next chapter should be about the really big problem...Which era to stay in and how they will make a living and also another lemon please.... :'-(
I love this story it is so romantic.I wish a guy would do that for me and everything.You should definatley continue.I think the next chapter should be about the really big problem...Which era to stay in and how they will make a living and also another lemon please.... :'-(
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice one-shot!!! Please continue writing and let me know when you post more stories!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was really good. You should definitely keep writting