rate_review Reviews

i loved it . it was romantic but i dont get why they would do that tho . well they love each other . please keep writting please it was so good.

Even though Im so guilty of writing them, POV's usually dont turn out well. Lord Archive's Rejected(A Ranma fanfic) series is one of the few written entirely in POV that makes it work. I write mine as one shots. They are ragged, immediate, and quick. As I think that they should be. However, having said all that. I adore WAFF. I adore Inu/Kagome sweetness. Its not as brutal as Inu/Sango. Its not as immediate as Inu/Ayame. And it isnt as insubstantial as Inu/Rin.


So madam, you have made me a happy man.

Please, expeiment, continue to write. Make more people happy.

That. Was. Awsome. And so, heart warming. I guess would be the right word. I personally loved it. *Applause*

That was beautiful. I love it!!!

No! don't give up writing! you're good, even though there were a few spelling errors, but everyone has those. that was a sweet story, one of the sweetest i've read yet. maybe you could even write a sequel? i think that you could...

Very good, evelently done

Go on... Your're a great writer and that was a very well written deep story, it would be awesome to have another chapter added to that, as for being lazy... I'll bet you that you could probably write another chapter of the same length as your first- and i would still be thinking of an idea for a new fic.
ZEBZ

Oh i didn;'t sign in before and I also noticed at the bottom you were thinking of continuing? I'd say yes definitly. This one was excellent, and even if ou don't I'd love to read any more IY fics you wirte!

Really, really cute! Inuyasha is adorable when he's angsty and sad. My only problem with the story is that you totally missed a lot of punctuation marks, so a lot of sentences never really ended. It was...weird. But otherwise...yay!

Your right, I am lazy.. but I will review for you. I know that those are the things that keep a writer going. I really liked it. it was very sweet. As to if you should continue.. you could or you could leave it as a stand alone. I like it either way. Great Work.