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by AshtonRose

schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I DID liked his one... really, don't know why but their twisted, angry, confused personalities matches
person person
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* That was too cool. Naraku and Kohaku... AWESOME!!!! Muwahahaha... so much inspiration is upon me from this one fic... thank you very much for posting this. ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's really great--good characterization and a powerful ending.
person Snovelor
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've always had a thing for bad guys, and so i like the naraku/kohaku pairing. it's the perfect antidote to too much sessh/rin :) so dark and twisted, heh, and i like kohaku's reaction to it all, he would give in. excellent!
person Rawben
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh... that was bad. but i liked it! :O lol, good work. very... bittersweet.