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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a bit confusing with out the "" maybe u can go thu and put those in. that way its not so confusing and easier to read.
jinggles
jinggles
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
K the whole no "" thing is BUGGING ME! it seriously makes it sound like a 6 year old read it and u cant just say she or he said all thime it gets anoyyin
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this looks promising
but not using quotations is torture!
and the time frames are a little spaced out.
you also randomly start talking about one thing when you've been talking about another for the past 5 minutes.
you really have to work on grammar and spelling.
so all in all i give this a 2 out of 5.
but not using quotations is torture!
and the time frames are a little spaced out.
you also randomly start talking about one thing when you've been talking about another for the past 5 minutes.
you really have to work on grammar and spelling.
so all in all i give this a 2 out of 5.
schedule
August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo good writtin
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo! i hope you right another chapter e-mail me.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. ONE THING, PLEASE TRY TO MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER. AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ME AGAIN. JUST READ CHAPTERS 9, 10, AND 11. ALL GREAT CHAPTERS, TRY TO PUT MORE DETAILS IN IT OR SOMETHING. PLEASE UPDATE SOON RU RU.