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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! This was really good.......MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU WILL DO ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!! RIN AND SESSHOMARU FOREVER!!!!!!!!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. you know, i'm really hesitant about reading the fics that have a summary of "this is my first lemon..." but this was damn good!! amazing really! i'll be looking for your upcoming fic... ;)
and just so you have some constuctive critisim: i found the exclamation points distracting. in the dialog and thoughts it's great, but in the normal stuff... i dont know, it seems strange... just a thought.
but yey for lemons! i hope you end up practicing more here! woohoo! one-shots! ;)
and just so you have some constuctive critisim: i found the exclamation points distracting. in the dialog and thoughts it's great, but in the normal stuff... i dont know, it seems strange... just a thought.
but yey for lemons! i hope you end up practicing more here! woohoo! one-shots! ;)
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! i know you! i've been reading your other fic! :P lol