rate_review Reviews

AWESOME!! Sorry. I really enjoyed this fan fiction, it was incredibly well written! You could be a novel author!

hm pretty hot as is but maybe like after she gets off the first time have him lip her over doggy so he can get off and then she can again with him that'd be hot ~_^

WWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so good!^_^ I love it. This is just what I needed at the end of the day. Your writing is spectacular, please continue with more lemony goodness! I can't wait to read your other stories. You really capture Sesshomaru and Rin's character well. A+++++ Keep it up!^_-

hey,for your practice lemon that was pretty damn good!! um, to make it more...realistic, i guess you could add more sounds, like "oh my god!!...master please take me,take me now...uhnnn...pplease, harder "etc., lolz. its really hot when your reading a story and you feel like your the one in it. anywayz, i recommend Kuronekosama's fanfic "The Hot Springs", not that you have to write like her, but if your a Sess/Rin fan like i am, you'll wanna get a look at this. its probably as hot as its ever gonna get. sorry for the long review...i ramble a lot, lol

im going to be truthfull to you that was one of the BEST story/lem i'v ever read!!!!! keep up the good work

you must have written lemons before cuz that waz the BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU BETTER MAKE MORE CUZ THAT WAZ HOT (I LOVE RIN & SESSHOMARU STORYS/LEM)

woww...great lemon!!!! :)))

I would try to offer you advice but after reading that totally hot scene I can't think straight. ;-)

I think this lemon was great

I'm mailing from the France because I'm French mother (45 y.). Your lemon is very pretty, I was pleased and found it subtl. The only thing about lemon I just readed before and yours that is not wonderful, is when that's done, emotions, descriptions, thoughts... are dying very quickly ! Bouh ! I want more ...! Nevertheless, your writing begins very good and I encourage you to continue.

Bye, Marion