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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit skeptical from the summary, but I completely enjoyed your first chapter. Your grammar and spelling were very well done! I enjoy the premise of the story and look forward to reading more!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Silent,
I have been reading your work and am interested in reading more. You have such a grasp on fantasy fiction combined with a twist of sexualty it is astounding. Your talent may be raw, but I feel that you have such potential. You are a blossoming Anne Rice mixed with a little bit of William Faulkner. Have you been professionally published yet?
I have been reading your work and am interested in reading more. You have such a grasp on fantasy fiction combined with a twist of sexualty it is astounding. Your talent may be raw, but I feel that you have such potential. You are a blossoming Anne Rice mixed with a little bit of William Faulkner. Have you been professionally published yet?
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kool!!! Love it!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say I like how you've started this, I am definately interested in seeing more of what happens... I think dear old Sesshou is gonna meet his match in our miss Kagome. She's already "thrown down the gauntlet" you could say by startling him even by only a small amount.
Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon.
Gypsy.
Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon.
Gypsy.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! It's been a while since there has been a Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing with this much plot (and without the regular "business" sesshy and inu-chan executives who aren't demons). War weapons, underwater technology, Youkai, and Ningens working together, somewhat, in harmony; what more could I ask for...? Oh! I know...another chapter! Please...aheh...>_< Do continue writing. Thanky!!!
-Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere
-Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere