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for In Under Deep

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person CJ
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to add another chapter on to this. This is one of my favorite stories so if you could please add another chapter on that would make my day alittle better than what it usually is.
person cherrychaos =)
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I juuuuust finished reading what you've got so far for IUD, and I'd just love to tell you that I find this story absolutely amazing =D. I can't wait to read ch 7! lmao, so ya, just reviewed you to notify you have yet another fan for this fic ;)
person Danielle
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoyin this fic. Love the sharks,'specially tom, he has good taste in hair *teehee*. It's a great stpry so don't stop and i hope school isn't killing you like it is me.
person Elisa
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I wish Sesshomaru got the chance to answer Tom's question, I really wanted to know what he was going to say...but oh well. Please update soon! ^_~
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Good Humor as well, I'll be anxiously waiting for your next update....... ^_^
person Subaru
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cute, I cant wait till the next update!
person lost child
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, that was an excellent chapter. Finally we're getting some where, now Kagome and Sesshoumaru will have to talk things out with each other. Oh boy Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter! I do so love it when you involve Tom and Shi, I often wait for the times you do.
person Arryelle(A.K.A Sexgoddess)
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOO stinky Will is a spy duh I so knew that lol. but yea I love it can't wait till sesshy and or kags makes the moves on each other. Otherwise I love this sstory it's very nice and I hope you..
Update soon


Arryelle
person Snowfall
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* You told me that you had gotten a beta. If this is the best the person can do, you definitely need to find someone else. It is very frustrating. I can handle a small amount of errors, but you have too many. I like this story, but have to fight with myself to read it. I'm being honest in the hope that you will take measures so that the experience you provide for your readers will be more pleasant.
person Subaru
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter alot! The traitor Will adds some nice spice, please update soon!