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for In Under Deep

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person Marita
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Me encanta la historia, ojalá y puedas actualizarla... es fantástica..
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope someday you decide to continue this story. It is one of the most original story lines I have read in a long time!
person snowbird
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hellooooo!!!!!!! You said over a year ago that you would return and finish this story about this time date wise. You said you had to temporarily put it on hold due to college, classes, and I think work. Please, are you ready to return to this unforgettable and worth waiting for story? It stole my heart and I can't give up on it.
person Snowfall
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohayo! I was thinking about this fic today and finally remembered the name of it. When are you going to update, girl!? I know it has been the busy holiday season, so I'll cut you some slack.

Now that Nicole has shown Kagome what love can be, I hope that Kagome can understand Sesshoumaru's actions better, particularly the protective kind. ^_^ Oooh, can't wait til the next chappie! I still love Tom and Shi. I hope that you have plenty more cameo's with them. Oh! And I just love Inuyasha's protectiveness of Kagome and how he realizes that Kagome is not a one night stand with Sesshoumaru. The episode in the store, where his beast almost broke its leash, was great fun. Yum. And the lime in the hallway is just to die for! Their energies crackling together. Gah! *falls over*

I fell in love with you description of Kagome swimming when Sesshoumaru saw her. Or, I think he did. It's been a while since I read it.

Nicole is turning out to be more than running comedic relief. You've given her a stronger footing in the fic with both Sesshoumaru and Kagome going to her for advice. That is nice.

Well, I do hope that you get time for another chappie soon!

Snow

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person The Black Crow
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI Hi!!!
Oh My Gods!!!!!! I absolutelly love this story!!! xD
The way the characters act, those new ones that you create; but most of all... Because of the sharks!!!! ;D
I complitely love this creatures! And Tom and Shi beeing so sweet cchid-like make it all the better ^_^
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Naraku and all this "conspiracy"... Nor can I wait to know what will Sessh do to "court" dear Kagome ^_^
I know it may sound out of the blue, but could you put in the story that, don't know, Kagome beeinng hurt by something, so to show a little more of dog-dimons overproetective side. An so a little of Nicole and Inuyasha's too ^_^
I really hope to see you soon with the next chapter of this amazing soty
Be$h!7º$H.." U(^.^)
Byes
person lost child
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh great wonderful you! You've updated, I've been checking this story almost everyday in the hopes you'd update. Man I love this story so much! I kind of wish you could publish it so I could go out and buy it and have it to own. Or be able to make it into a show. Oh it would be so cool to watch...dang I gotta know what happens next, you have to update soon
person angel
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ....... later for now

angel
person swtdrm01
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Thank you for updating. I hope we get to read the next chapter soon.
person sodapop0006
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter, what fun! :) And Sesshomaru with actual feelings... and admitting to them.... whoa! I'm enjoying this very much and I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for the next installment. Cheerio!
person Kaze
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter. I feel bad for Inuyasha though, he's all alone =(

I'm waiting for next chapter.