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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*ovation*
Thank you for the time, thought, and love you put into this story. And thank you for having Sesshomaru NOT say -the three words- but at least TRY to say them*. I keep repeating myself, but I'll say it again: I love how the brothers' intimate relations are so "competitive." It's both entertaining and authentic! And don't worry about your costume omissions (beads, fluff, etc.). Sometimes those things are like the bathrooms on sci-fi shows' ships; they're just THERE... they don't have to be constantly seen/mentioned. I hope school treats you well, and I look forward to your next quality SxI contribution.
~Sam
*I sure HOPE that's what he was trying to say, and not "Inuyasha, I am tired; sit in that other tree."
Thank you for the time, thought, and love you put into this story. And thank you for having Sesshomaru NOT say -the three words- but at least TRY to say them*. I keep repeating myself, but I'll say it again: I love how the brothers' intimate relations are so "competitive." It's both entertaining and authentic! And don't worry about your costume omissions (beads, fluff, etc.). Sometimes those things are like the bathrooms on sci-fi shows' ships; they're just THERE... they don't have to be constantly seen/mentioned. I hope school treats you well, and I look forward to your next quality SxI contribution.
~Sam
*I sure HOPE that's what he was trying to say, and not "Inuyasha, I am tired; sit in that other tree."
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes. I know that picture and am glad that it inspired you to write this fic. I couldn't stop reading it by the way. Very well written. I like the way it focuses on the relationship more so than external stimuli. Sesshoumaru coming to Inuyasha with so much need was intriguing. I like that you chose to have Sess be the one to give in first. It was sweet to have Miroku be an understanding priest who could see what was happening. Once you did add action and other characters to the plot, it had a great affect on Sess and Inu. I liked that it wasn't just a passing skirmish with little consequences. You delved deep into Sess's psyche. I like that, as I have attempted to do the same in my fics.
Well, good show! I liked it very much. I'm glad you're writing in the Inu category and hope to see more fics here from you.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Well, good show! I liked it very much. I'm glad you're writing in the Inu category and hope to see more fics here from you.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great, I just hope we get and epilogue, maybe a one-shot after the final battle. I have to know how Kags takes it and if Sess and Inu stay together, nothing big, just an afterthought, it was too good not to know.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, great fic!! I've actually been reading this since you first posted it, but I'm weird and usually wait until a fic's done before I review. I want to say that I thought it was very well written, and was one of the most believable Inuyasha x Sesshoumaru fics I've ever read. I also liked the OCs quite a lot too. They didn't seem out of place, and the whole idea of them being demons from another country was cool too. Great work, and I can't wait to read the sequel!!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah battle scenes are hard.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the reason why tetsuiaga could be used against bakial(SP?) was because Inuyasha's fang was also in it. Either way you did a good job!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alas, Chernobog, we barely knew ye, ye gullible oaf. Chs. 9 and 10 are wonderful as always...
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ros is alive and the demon aura's can be deflected. The horror!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru's like the grinch his heart has grown 3 sizes too big.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that's so sweet, little inu sleeping in his brother's protective arms.