Well, this is beautifully confusing! Lol! I had to go back to the first part and confirm something I previously assumed with the given clues...
"...She had been impressed by Kaede's rosary and had not attempted to remove the spell, instead layering hers on top of it. Her spell... far more restrictive than the rosary spell. Far more... It didn't just subdue him when the chosen word was uttered, it bound his will to hers..."
See... I assumed the SHE was Kagome turned awful evil, power tripping in sickness! Imagine my surprise when she was just there in the next segment, napping under a tree like normal with Shippo! Haaha! So... I guess I wanted to know if the mysterious "she" would ever be revealed as far as identity goes? Excellent plot b.t.w.! I am truly enjoying this!!
NOOOOOOO WTF!!!??? Oh GODS
Great story!
Ya.. basically, the story is great. Your characterization was fantastic. And! Yer an awesome writer.
thanks for sharin' this with us here on the web.
Just awesome.
xox
Asialisek
delicious.
Read on!!