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by BlackberryPatch

schedule November 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well, this is beautifully confusing! Lol! I had to go back to the first part and confirm something I previously assumed with the given clues...

"...She had been impressed by Kaede's rosary and had not attempted to remove the spell, instead layering hers on top of it. Her spell... far more restrictive than the rosary spell. Far more... It didn't just subdue him when the chosen word was uttered, it bound his will to hers..."

See... I assumed the SHE was Kagome turned awful evil, power tripping in sickness! Imagine my surprise when she was just there in the next segment, napping under a tree like normal with Shippo! Haaha! So... I guess I wanted to know if the mysterious "she" would ever be revealed as far as identity goes? Excellent plot b.t.w.! I am truly enjoying this!!

schedule November 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

NOOOOOOO WTF!!!??? Oh GODS 

schedule October 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story!

person Vyper
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love these stories you have written. Thank you.
person Iarejedi
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story alot. The development between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru was perfect. It wasn't to fast. And it flowed naturally. The OC characters were very well done. It was nice to see a writer who could add them into their story and not ruin the rest. :D So great job. Very hot yaoiness. :D I'm gonna move on to your other stuff now. :D
person kunitsu
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful, I love how you wrote out the confusion that both brothers felt and how they accepted thier own feelings
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Loved it!!!
person asialisek
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be one of my fav. sess x inu fics out there (as of 5min. ago). not only 'cuz it's well written (that's an additional plus for the enjoyment factor), but also because you preserved an Inuyasha that doesn't turn into a simpering, blubbering, emotional basket case in the face of conflict. Both of them realize (finally) the potential in the other and start to grow with it. Inu isn't all bluster and no brains, and Sess isn't so aloof a cold (plus emotionally ignorant) that he ends up causing more damage than necessary.

Ya.. basically, the story is great. Your characterization was fantastic. And! Yer an awesome writer.

thanks for sharin' this with us here on the web.
Just awesome.

xox

Asialisek
person asialisek
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sequel! joy! just left a review for Inglorious ... aaaand.. lol didn't realize my wish would come true.
delicious.

Read on!!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arg! I love this, it's the best S/I I've read, even though I'm pretty new to yaoi. So, please, more! (puppy dog eyes)