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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story and i hope you write more.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story. I thought this was going to be onf of those anti-Kikyou fics where she just dies and everyone rejoices..Miroku and Kagome are an odd pairing but I guess it could work.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting but very enjoyable.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story keep up the most excellent work.......
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looked like a really good fiction and especially since it's such a rare pairing, it really was distressing to find that it was really difficult to read. You really should look to break up your story a bit more. Giving the Dialogue its own line and then breaking it up into more paragraphs.
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Now, this may just be me and if so then feel free to ignore this review but I would've pushed on to read past chapter two if the format was a bit easier on the eyes. I just kept getting lost while reading. Although I must say the storyline is very good [of what I read] and very interesting [so cheering for Miroku and Kagome even though I'm normally a Inuyasha/Kagome shipper myself] I do hope you continue with this and just take my suggestion into consideration. ^_^
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Now, this may just be me and if so then feel free to ignore this review but I would've pushed on to read past chapter two if the format was a bit easier on the eyes. I just kept getting lost while reading. Although I must say the storyline is very good [of what I read] and very interesting [so cheering for Miroku and Kagome even though I'm normally a Inuyasha/Kagome shipper myself] I do hope you continue with this and just take my suggestion into consideration. ^_^
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They're finally about to get to it! WOOT! This is such a charming fic! I can't wait to read more!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love Kagome/Miroku pairings and I must say that this is one of the best I have read! I look forward to the next chapter!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is an awsome fic. I normally don't like Miroku/Kagome but this one is awsome!! I really like it, I mean like seriously... anyways I should be going thou... please update this fic whevever you get the time... Ja ne
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, pure greatness. It is great to see a actual complex story to this website which I don't see much of these stories around alot. This makes me glad, its a good fanfic and don't stop writting. My email is above if you want to contact me. ^^
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this fic so far. It's a wonderful, romantic take on the seldom seen M/K pairing. I can't wait to see how they, uh, spend the next few days in Kagome's time. Is Miroku finally going to *show* her exactly how much she means to him? I can't wait to find out! Please update soon!