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for Amaya's Bride

by Shuori

person Raven
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_<
person cookykid
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I hate you.
person Evelyn
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was one of my favorite stories by far. Really great idea, but I think it ended a little quickly and the ending was sort of confusing.

I know you're the author, though, so write however you like, and me being an author myself, appreciate anything that is good and I think this story is.

(Enough rambling out of me)
Eve
person Evelyn
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also, It sucks that Ume died! She was so my favorite character.
(Yeah, had to add that, dont know if she's your own OC, but I usually like OC's most in a story, or way OOC characters, cuz I get sick of reading storys on here some times, it gets monotonous. So this story was nice, It shook things up a bit)

(Im done rambling for sure this time, ^-^)
eve
person Lady_Mashala
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! POOR SESSHO!!! It was very good, though I would have like a little more Sessh/Inu. You should write a sequel about how Inu deals with this.
person BurningSilence (too lazy to log in)
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read your stories, Amaya's Bride and Lo Amate. I love BOTH of them...you like sad, don't you? But so do I...

This story was INCREDIBLY, disturbingly good. I felt actual GRIEF when Sesshoumaru died...But...did Amaya REALLY love him? Oh, I hope he did...it's just so...*tragic* that way. *Sigh* I'm a complete romantic...and I look forward to more stories from you!
person Xena
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If there is no Inuyasha/Sesshomaru content in this sory you need to move it. It is in the wrong section. It does not belong here.
person rin136
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I can't end Like this! The ending is just to painful! Ahhh! *crying*
person God of Insanity
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your fanfic, it was original and different. ^^ I have a question, though. Is that the end? *pouts* I mean, how you left it off...it seemed very very very very very open for continuation or a sequel... *flutters eyelashes* Pweeeese? Man, everybody really loves killin' sess off, don't they?

Anywhos, seriously...this needs something else, because it doesn't seem finished to me. I'm just saying. I'm not trying to push you into anything or to order you around or something... *nods*... Its just a suggestion/advice to a writer from a writer AND fan...
person ishkibibbles
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no way! he can't be dead!