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Well, this whole story was just AWESOME. damn your good at this. Please continue

I am enjoying this fic, it is very dark and angsty, something I don't usually like but when well written it is quite enjoyable. Can't wait to read more.

Ja ne!!

I have to say that this is a fantastic story and I cannot wait to read more of it! :o)

awsome fic!!! i am loven it. please continue i need to know what happens. does inu and kags son ever find out that they are really his parents and that he killed there future selfs? does naraku get a hold in him? and if this all happened when shippo was 6 doesnt that mean kag should with child right now? i mean isnt that how old shippo is now? and how did shippo end up in the future? anyway this is some awsome writting i really an enjoying this fic so please update again soon.

Well i suppose i was a bit hasty in saying that it completly confused me... But i did need to slow the reading down [maybe i should start taking notes?] well i dont think ill go that far. But i didnt expect to be recognized for my comment, so i thank you. Oh and it has been a while since ive had to piece together a storyline that complex- but you kept track of it well. Ill reiterate that it was a great story and i look forward to more chapters soon.
ZEBZ[were all a little crazy right?]

Okay okay okay- i think you need to rent some memory to some old people with that disease- cause you got a filing cabinet up there. Next point- how do you keep that plot straight in your crazy head(no offense please)??? I can usually multitask-case in point- watch tv(or listen to it at least), listen to music, and read these... But i had to turn down the tv and turn off the music, to keep that straight in my head!!!
WELL YOU COMPLETLY CONFUSED ME
keep up the good work-ZEBZ

It is really good

Oh WOW! I love this storie, It's so sweet and very well written. I love the way you made the mating mark show up as tattoos across their bodies. Very nicely done. Hope you update soon!

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am totally gon tell ma friends bout dis stori. it is captivating (I seem to b using dat word a lot now) aand i could see it happening in an inuyasha episode (or by the length of it most likely over ten). this is so creative and that little part where that guy (u kno the bad guy) is thinking. my advice is for you to leave us wanting more at each of the chapters. like chapter 8 is making me want to kno if he will change his plans and go with his gut or ignore the feeling. I also want to kno how inu n kag r gon to handle this. But this is jus one girls opinion so dont put to much thought into it.
4 STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!