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for Sweet Revenge

by BrethlessM

person mhika
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really loved this fic! it was such a sweet story! i'm so glad that whole revenge plan got resolved...but it was pretty funny though when Kouga found Inuyahsa "mauling" Kagome...lolz. well, keep up the good work ;)
person xxLostwolfxx
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww! that was so cute! ^_^ Kouga and Ayame are my favorite pairing on Inuyasha. And this story was so cute!
person Gina
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that was Amazing~!!!!!! ^_^
i love your work
is your biggest fan!!!
person New Fan
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one-shot. I glad that Kouga finally find happiness with Ayame.
person sesshy_lover
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! BEFORE, KOUGA AND AYAME WERENT MY FAVORTITE INUYASHA PAIRINGS BUT NOW THAT I READ THIS STORY I LOVE THEM BOTH TOGETHER SOOO SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY HEART IS STILL THUMPING AS WE SPEAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER... EVEN IF THIS WAS THE END!!!!!!!!!... WAHHH!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person stueyman2099
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, you never cease to amaze me with your writing ability. your insight into a characters persona is just incredible. great story, great lemon, cant wait for more!
person Anjel Rocker (not logged in)
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That had to be the best Kouga/Ayame fanfiction that I have ever read. I really did like it. You are an amazing writer. -smiles-

~AR
person Diane
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kim...wow!! I really think you are improving!!To write such a good story about characters that theres not to much background and info on is great!! There was something a little more powerful about the lemon part, the fact that you took into consideration that its two powerful demons going at it, not a halfdemon and a human.. You really brought it out!!! I was never feeling these two enoghf to make a fan art, but your story did it. I think its only fair you have at least one pic each for each of your one shots, being I have to get the fan art outta my system. You know, you really have to play FFX, I would love to see a fic from your pespective. If you ever wanna, I'll break down the story for ya, and you can make me a nice one shot..*begs* Love ya Sis, keep it up!
person Vikki
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY i reviewed...and i think i'm the first...i'm hopeing. Ok on to something other then me screaming YAY. Ok this story i like this one more then the last one shot...but have always said that the more you make the better you're going to get at it. Still not as good as beautiful soul but i think you'll by pass that one day. I can't stay long and write a lot about this one, i have to do some homework on Greek/Roman myth.*hint hint* So, let me leave with a I LOVED IT. i always love your work. OK bye bye forever your fan, vikki
person SHADOW.
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A GRATE FIC....AND I CAN ONLY HOPE THAT YOU WILL MAKE MORE KOUGA/AYAME FICS REALLY SOOOOON, PLEASE...OHH TOTALY LOVE YOUR WRITING, AND YOU SHOULD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.