rate_review Reviews

oh wow this was great!
im trying to read alot of stories with lemons
because im currently working on my first one too
so the ideas just need to come to me
well great job!
^_^

you have to add chapters

Yes, continue please!

write more chapters!!!!! this is good!!! i wanna know what happens next please!!! if you dont i wont give you any cookies!
*holds bag of cookies out of reach*

woo! you must update soon/now please!!!!

sweet lemonny goodness, couldn't tell it was your first lemon fic.
WWWWWOOOOOOWWWWWW, you have lots more story to tell.
Sssoooo, do update & soon. email me when you do.
LOL

Thank you all for your kinds words.. I know the "chapters" were short - It was only going to be one then I thought breaking it up more sense. I need to figure our spacing better too! :) I am starting to get inspired again, so I will add more to the story soon. What can I say, Inuyasha inspires me, as well as fellow writers' stories!

I believe we have a new writer among us today. A round of applause for this incredible story! Now you had a question there about adding chapters possibly. You wouldn't mind doing that would you? Now they don't have to be lemons of course, but the way you write is very, very eloquent. Your easily a five star writer in my book, and as such you get of course, five stars from me. Continue if you want, and hopefully you do, but if not, please do not give up writing. Personally though, I wish I could write like you. It was great. Oh yes, and the story you have now can have so much happen in it, so don't give it up!

Hey even though this was you're first lemon it didn't seem like it good job

Being your first lemon, I’m telling you, it was a good one and you are right your lemons ARE sweet. It would be great if you could add more chapters and also make them longer. If you do I’ll appreciate it. Update as soon as you can PLEASE.