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for A New Life For Two

by kimisan

schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh Kagome. The temptation is so great. Don't give in until you nail his butt down to a commitment or you might end up like Sango. This chapter confirmed my thoughts that Yusuke is a total idiot. Perhaps he doesn't deserve Sango then. Especially since she means so little that he would bed her, claim her and then leave her without much of a second thought. He needs to figure his feelings out soon. I'd love to help, I have the Frying Pan of Vengeance here ready and waiting to dent his hard head in *Hefts it over shoulder* Good chapter, update soon please!
person EatAPeach
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love you yet? Cause if I haven't, I think I should. Great job! I love the fact that your OC's aren't completely obnoxious. Oh, and I'm so glad to see Hiei making Yusuke squirm! Yay for triangles! Anyway, great job--keep it up!!
person Chigirl
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was wondering when a lemon was going to show up!!! That kiss in chapter I think it was 14 was so hot, then the lemon topped it off perfectly. You are too talented for words. I love this story and have been reading and waiting all day! Thank you for the quick updates, please continue to do so! If I had to wait for this story, I'd probally pull my hair out!!! Please update soon and keep up the excellent work. Your the best!!!

Chigirl
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor sango has to go through soo much but im likin how the story is ^^ make yusuke jealouse thats very good and it seems hiei is more then willing to help !!
i cant wait till u update
person Chigirl
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke is being a real ass, and making him jealous was just perfect!!! This is the greatest story ever!!! Please update soon I can barley wait to find out what happens! Your the best!!!

Chigirl
person Chigirl
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Owww!!! Your no fun leaving it there. That was a really exciting part!!! Please you have to update soon, I don't think I can wait!!! Your the greastest, and so is your story!!! Keep up the good work, hopefully it won't be long before I read the next chapter!

Chigirl
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Chuckles* Very good chapter, can't wait to see what the guys thinks of them after spending the evening with them. I can only imagine the thoughts that were going through their heads watching the girls spare. I look forward to the next chapter, update soon please.
person Soleil
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK you!! Jesus H tap-dancing Christ! There are so many stories that have Sango and Kagome get scared at the most asinine things. With what they went through in the past, it's just NOT realistic. Having Sango break the boy's nose on reflex was beautiful, and I am unbelievably delighted that you chose to keep their characterization in-line with their experience than change them to wailing spineless school-girls just because they're "not fighting" or "not in the past." That was VERY nice to see, especially when I was so afraid it was going to go differently.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats one way to screw up someones day. Swallowed by a large hole in the ground. I wonder if something is going to happen to Kagome and Kurama now. Hopefully they can contact each other through the communicators. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyes my last review* you know, I can spell. Honest, now how in the heck I managed to let that many typos slip past me I will never know unless I was distracted. Which is a distinct possibility. Anyhow, I'm not sure if you would be interested but The Imaginative Love Kurama/Kagome Shrine has a Fanfiction library dedicated to Kur/Kagome if you wanted to post your fic there as well. I'm uncertain as to whether or not links are allowed or not so.. If you do a search on Google with "Imaginative Love" It's the first website listed.