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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, and you are right. Coffee does sound good right about now. Tenseiga is doing a wonderful job for Sango, I'm wondering if it will protect her from danger as it had done with Lord Sesshoumaru. It might very well transport her (and maybe Keiko who knows) out of the castle. Glad to see that Kurama seems to have come around and is watching over Kagome as more than a job and potential bed partner. Or at least I hope he is *Pokes him and warns him he better be or it's the frying pan ov vengeance for him* Update soon please!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh gotta love the girls getting down and dirty with each other. I can only hope that the guys were especially turned on by that particular show. Seems like this demon fights a bit dirty. Hope the girls kick his ass. Good chapter, update soon please.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Kohaku's jumped into the mix? Crazy! I like how you haven't made Jaken a total ass--he may be a pain, but so many people exaggerate to the point of obnoxious when it comes to his character. Nice job! Oh, and is Hiei possibly harboring a little affection (or at least lust) for Sango, or is he just looking out for her? That would kick so much ass for Hiei to offer a little competition for Yusuke (or Jin, that would be cool to)! Anyway, as you can see I'm really enjoying your fic, and I love that you have updated soooo quickly. Thanks so much for sharing it with us! Keep up the good work!
Peace,
EatAPeach
Peace,
EatAPeach
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg her brother is still alive!!!!!! poor poor sango wat will she do ? please pleae update soon
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shocking Hiei is just too much fun. Glad that he and Kagome could bail each other out when they needed it. Perhaps that will ease the tension between those two slightly. Turning Kagome loose on Yusuke could be extremely amusing. He needs a good swift kick in the ass, I'm sure Kagome would be more than willing to give it to him. Good chapter, update soon.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* Oh god LMAO That is the very last thing I expected Kagome to do. She's really full of pissitivity today thats for damn sure lol Great chapter, please update soon!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic. I have never seen a Yus/San pairing. I like it, I would also like to see a fic with Yus/Kag, those are rare. Yusuke is being a huge jerk! Will he get the snot kicked out of him for it? It would be just right for The dragon to knock some sense into him! Don't let Sango get to hurt please. You are a great writer.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a point about the lemon, I wouldn't worry about it myself. Hiei is right, competition is just what Yusuke needs to pull his head out of his ass. Kurama on the other hand, I'm not sure what can be done to help him in that department right now lol A good swift kick might be a start but somehow I dunno that Hiei would interfere in that one. *Snuggles the fire apparition* Twas a good chapter, please update soon.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, nicely done. I like how you don't have Kagome falling all over Kurama like she does in many fics. It's nice to see them bickering a little--in fact I don't think I've ever read a Kagome/Kurama pairing that didn't have them both all googly-eyed and cuddly kissy over one another from the get go. Good job! Well, keep those updates coming and I'll be sure to read!
Peace,
EatAPeach
Peace,
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, and the action was also good!!! Please hurry and update I can't wait to find out what happens when Sango and Yusuke finally have it out!!! Keep up the great work, your the best!!!!
Chigirl
Chigirl