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for A New Life For Two

by kimisan

schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Yusuke is gonna die if he doesn't do the right thing I am positive. Can't wait to see this little "talk" he is about to have. Please update soon.
person Random Person
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fanfic!!!! dont get me wrong i feel bad cause Inuyasha died but Sango being with Yusuke is HOTT!! good fic cant wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Kurama showed up in the nick of time. Glad that no one else was hurt. I'm sure Kurama will be okay. I'm right proud of Keiko at the moment, giving Yusuke the kick in the ass that he needs. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bout damn time Kurama started looking at her as more than just a quick lay lol Maybe now he'll start pursuing her seriously and attempt to convince her he is serious. Yusuke.. Yusuke... Yusuke whatever are we to do with him? I rather like Haru, nice OC by the way. Can't wait to see what it is Inuyasha means by teaching Kagome how to weild the Tetsusaiga. I wonder if she'll be able to get it to transform. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Chigirl
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well a bit of action never hurt anyone!!! This a great chapter and I hope you update soon!!! Sango shouldn't make it so easy for him. Another scare is definately in order. This is a wonderful story and it came together so well, other authors, namely myself, could learn a thing or two about updating our stories quicker!!! Please keep up the good work. Your the best!!!

Chigirl
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so much fun. I love the pairings. It was very creative of you to switch the girls roles regarding the guys they loved in the past. Sango loving Yusuke who acts like Inu and Kagome loving Kurama who she thinks is like Miroko. Just so much fun. Lots of angst and action and romance. I just love it. I understand why you made the lemon between Yus and Sango so short, given the fact of inexperience on both their parts, but it would be nice to have them explore each other's body at this point. Also, Kurama does know his way around a woman's body so I'm hoping for a really hot lemon with Kurama showing Kag what she's been missing out on. Oh boy. I think I've said enough. Great job with the fic. Looking forward to more.
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...bout damn time, Urameshi!! *Grins* An excellent chapter, and it was brilliant that Kagome and Inu still are arguing even after all this time. It's a wonderful story, keep up the great work! =)
Sayuri-chan :: heart ::
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers* Kurama got felt up.... And he objected! LMAO Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....rofl. KAWAII!! I can just see Kagome doing that to Youko. He got quite a bit pissy with her though, I'm sure she'll get him back for that. Hiei's warming up to her presence too, which is a good thing. He's always so lonely...*frown* What's Yusuke going to do now? Is he going to close up and hide from Sango again, or will he tell Keiko its over? I've gotten the impression that he really doesn't love her more than in a friendship type way. Maybe it's just me. Another awesome chapter, hope to see more soon! =)
Sayuri-chan :: heart ::
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Falls down* Oh hell! Take that Yusuke! ROFL Hopefully he doesn't faint while holding Sango, it's certain to be a shock to his system. *Sends Hiei to give Kurama a good kick in the butt* Get your sexy fox butt moving and talk to Kagome lol Good chapter, Update soon please!