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for A New Life For Two

by kimisan

person Chigirl
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened?!!! How could you just leave it there?!!! Please you have to update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens to my two favorite characters. Yusuke and Sango!!! This story is the best and so are you!!! Keep up the good work!!!

Chigirl
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter, even though I ended up rereading several chapters several times before I could finish it. Teach me to carry on two IM conversations, one RL conversation while attempting to read. Doesn't work well lol I'm glad the girls got the message that they needed from Inu and Miroku even if it was a bit painful to hear. Now perhaps they can truly progress forward with their lives. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
person demonqueen
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. An interesting take one events after the fight with Naraku. I like your idea of the pairing you have decided on. What will be interesting will be the pair of Sango and Yurimeshi. Since the Spirit Detective seems to be kind of like Inuyasha, one wonders how a demon exterminator will react to this. Yes, Sango got along with Inuyasha, but she wasn't in love with him like she was with the monk. The coming chapters will be something. Sango and Yurimeshi both have stronge wills and personalities. Could be some rough times ahead. If I remember correctly, Yurimeshi could curse just like Inuyasha and he too loves to fight. Will be awaiting further chapters to see how things go. Thanks for the good story you are sharing with us.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo! Go Yusuke!! Glad to see it wasn't a problem for him. To the victor goes the spoils, and in this instance I seriously doubt that Sango will object lol Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke's got some serious thinking to do before they get through this mess. I honestly can't see him happy with Keiko but thats just me. I always see them as having a brother/sister relationship. Kurama needs to believe that Kagome can indeed take care of herself and can do alot to help him in the Makai. SHe might be human but that doesn't mean she is helpless. Good chapter, cant wait to read the next one. Update soon please.
person demonqueen
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. A lot of twists and turns, makes one wonder what is coming next. Can hardly wait to see what will occur next to our two couples.
person aleerasuru
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story kicks ass it awsome
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that was a wonderful way to interrupt a wedding. Beautifully done! Now not only does the YYH team know about Sango and Kagome's "professions" the humans of the wedding party and family are going to want to know what the hell it was that just happened if they don't know of the existance of demons already lol Looks like it is going to be an extremely interesting next couple of hours. Good chapter, update soon please!
person aleerasuru
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
drama drama drama
person EatAPeach
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe how quickly this story is progressing--you're awesome! Thanks so much for the rapid updates. I really like what you have going here--you've managed to give a relatively common scenario it's own unique voice and set it apart from so many of the YYH IY crossovers out there. Nicely done! I'm excited about what you have in store for us!